Cutting For Stone:
His fingers shielded the fire, a nine-fingered sepulchre.
Me:
Her hands wielded the jewels, a ten-fingered cage.
The author compares his hands to a sepulchre, creating a sense of exaltedness.
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I enjoyed reading your sentences. I was looking forward to reading the last four!
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